This is awesome! You should write more original songs. I love the theme. If I may give you one suggestion: dramatically increase the friction (not resentment, but frustration), to give the song a stronger impact.
Thanks Katrine! I'll keep that in mind. The song leans on the silly side - which is probably more clear if I'd done the whole thing. For example, verse 2:
This is awesome! You should write more original songs. I love the theme. If I may give you one suggestion: dramatically increase the friction (not resentment, but frustration), to give the song a stronger impact.
Thanks Katrine! I'll keep that in mind. The song leans on the silly side - which is probably more clear if I'd done the whole thing. For example, verse 2:
When you've told me a hundred times
That I should put the toilet seat down
And you say if it happens again
I might as well up and leave town
I try to be good, but then I forget
And suddenly you're all angry and wet
I'm kicked out of bed to sleep on the floor
And that's when I know....
:-)